Bullying, a crime or not?? 64% of people think that bullying should be a crime, 10% of people think that if there is any physical harm in the bullying then it should be a crime and the others don't think it’s a crime at all. I think that bullying is a very horrible thing but I don't know if it should be a crime.
What is bullying? Bulling is repeated violence or harassment on a person. My reasons for bullying being a crime is that, number 1, is that it hurts many people in emotions as well as physical. People if they bully, should have a great punishment, but not like going to jail or that serious. Maybe like community service or something like that. Scientist's say that bullying happens often in elementary schools, but even more in high schools. Mostly boys get bullied more then girls, but girls do get bullied as well. Bullying can lead to kids committing suicide as well as being depressed for the rest of there lives. There are many types of bullying such as cyber bullying, which is when kids bully kids on the internet through facebook, twitter etc…. Another type of bullying is when you bully in school. This type is the one that happens very frequently. Most kids when being bullied don’t talk to anyone and just hide in the shadows. They should be telling a parent or if they are too scared to, then talk to a councilor. That is one of the things that kids do not do. Very recently bullying is become a well known thing to about everyone. We now have days where kids where pink because of a boy who got bullied, for wearing pink. People are very aware of bullying nowadays so bullying has come down a lot.
Bullying is a very horrible thing. People should stop bullying kids for their looks as well as how they dress. I believe that bullying should be a crime but not a very harsh crime such as going to jail. Hope what I said gives you an idea of how bullying is a very bad thing to do and lets help stop bullying.
Well said Chase!!
ReplyDeletePoints to work on:
Maybe next time add a bit more reasoning's to "Why" you think bullying is a crime.
Add in some more examples of bullying instead of just cyber bullying.
Like Ms Lees blog said, add atleast 2 resources you found on the internet for your subject.
But overall........ you did a nice job!
Hey Chase! Good post, I enjoyed the read :)
ReplyDeleteLike Shawn said, why do you feel like you don't know whether to say bullying is a crime or not? Maybe certain types and levels of bullying should be a crime? Keep in mind that bullying not only affects the direct victim but his or her family and community! Sounds familiar to maybe a murder victim right? So maybe that's one point to support bullying as a crime.
I like how you posted facts about bullying but I am sure Ms Lees and your fellow classmates would love to hear your own personal opinion. Have you ever been a victim of bullying? How did it make you feel? Do you know any friends that have been bullied? I think using personal examples might better help you answer the question AND get you a higher mark!
Hi Chase,
ReplyDeleteI thought that your final post was a bug improvement over your last two posts!
However, some points you might want to take into consideration are:
Have an opinion. I find that in most of your posts, you say that you cannot decide whether something is right or wrong. I find that it might benefit your post if you stated which side you are for, and then gave solid exAmples as to why you say that.
Also, you didn't really say why thought that bullying should not be a crime. You stated why it was a crime, but not why it wasn't. I feel that if you are undecided as to your opinion, you should have given supporting details to both sides.
But I like that you added statistics, and that you explained what bullying is. Overall, good post, just remember to add your sources.
Hey Chase, first post I've read of yours, not too bad!
ReplyDeleteJust to touch on what the previous comments stated, when you're righting a post about a topic try to pick a side that you want to fight on and drive your point across. Many people want to read an article where there is a definitive point and argument. Overall good job!