Hi
My name is Shawn Liu and today my topic is about:
Should fitness programs be in schools educational system?
For this question I am going to be answering a yes and a no and here are some reasons why.
For starters, PE can be a very healthy for young students like us.
For the people who mainly dont do exercise a lot and tend to play video games I would say that PE is a very good subject for school. Many people who want to be famous and want to be sucessful in the future must have a very good fitness degree. PE also makes your body more fit and fit bodies make you more smart and healthy so for the people who are lazy and isnt athletic at all I think that fitness is a good program in the educational system.
Some kids are very healthy and have many afterschool sports teams. Many asian parents in this world now personally do not agree PE is a very good program for the educational system. Many asians tend to send there kids to afterschool programs that have sports and think that the education should be more important. Personally I also have to agree with the asians because personally, PE can be a waste of time to some people who are very fit. Education is a very big part of our lives and basically if we had PE, some people would think that we waste 70mins in school and we can learn so many stuff in that 70mins. Education is also very important so I that is my reason why PE is bad for the schools educational system.
Those are my thoughts for PE and how it is good or bad in the schools educational system.
Hi Shawn,
ReplyDeleteI do not think that you read the article that Ms. Lees posted for this topic, as it was about a specific BCIT course that has mandatory PE.
BCIT is a post-secondary, and it seemed that you were talking about high school and elementary students.
Also, your statement about asian parents confused me. Saying that asian parents do not like Physical Education is a bit stereotypical, and I think that you could have removed that part.
Good luck on the next one :)
Yes I agree with Kia. I made the same mistake, when I was talking about should PE be manditory. You were suppossed to be talking about BCIT. Good try on the first one, maybe just fix it up and then it will be fine.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comments, I will try to improve on the next post.
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